Ohio Impromptu

It's clearly lacrosse. 8)

Coming of age means going from having two realities (the one you're in and the one you'll have in the future where there's wonder and mystery and hope for it ...

Once every so often (it'd probably happen more if I came here more often) I read something with imagery thats so strong and vivid I'm forced to smile; it goes ...

Thanks Jiggy. I appreciate the comments. Anyone else have anything to say?

I got the e-mail, then promptly deleted it.

As far as haiku's go, these were great. I like how you weren't trying to cover too great subjects in haiku; something very few people can do. Haiku is meant ...

This was about a child on a playground, no? I liked this. It was simple yet vivid. The images were great, and I don't even feel like it needs to ...

I have a tendency to give stupid advice, so let me just say it reminded me of Sad But True by Metallica except it was more wordy. Aside from that, ...

Some of you may remember me posting the first part of this a while ago, but only recently have I been inspired enough to make a plan to turn it ...

Think of writing as a party. I'm the guy that arrived half way through and said to myself, "How the hell did I wind up here?" I decided to stay ...

Was it supposed to be read to he tune of Away In A Manger? :? I hope so, 'cause otherwise I missed the point.

Gah, it's been so long since I've read anything you've written - a fact I regret now after reading this. I swear, you're the most original poet on this whole ...

You can expand on haikus; all you do is write a series of them. Each haiku can be like a stanza in any other kind of poetry, all relating to ...

The words "Da Vinci Code" are rapidly flying through my mind here. I wonder why. :roll: Good advice.

It was too 'this is what's happening' when it should be 'this is what's happening and how, and why, and what it means. I guess te actions were supposed to ...